mise-en-scene video assessment

Jagraj

WWW- The video had good music this kept me entertained throughout the video and it wasn't too long. The make up and props that were used were interesting and made the character and theme stand out especially the fur at the back as it gave it more of the 'Red Indian look'.

EBI -He could've chosen a better setting for his video as it would've brought more attention to the character and theme of his project. For example he could've chose a more stylish background to make it look more professional as the wardrobe wasn't very appealing. 

Kacper

WWW - The make up was good especially the scar which added to the theme and aspect of the project as it made her look quite scary. The video speed was good, it wasn't to slow. The clear background allowed brought the characters theme and costume out more and added to the effect of the make up.

EBI - There should've been music playing as it got quite boring without music and made the project seem quite plain.

Devesh

WWW: The makeup transformation was really good as it looked very professional, especially the eye makeup. The background that was used throughout the video added to the glamorous look created by the wallpaper also the chair went well with the theme as it seemed quite classy. The speed of the video wasn't too fast it was just right for the music and the theme,the video didnt become boring as it wasn't too long.

EBI: The video could have been improved by showing a overall look with the character letting their hair down, which would have added to glamour look. however the choice of music could've been better for this project as it didnt quite fit the theme. It gave off a different feel which didn't go with the persona being created throughout the video. The lighting could have been improved as it is quite hard to see the little details, especially when she is doing her eye makeup.

In the future when editing i think i could use better transitions for my videos as it would've flowed better and maybe i could try different speeds for different parts of the video instead of making it all one speed.in terms of clamps the lighting was quite good as it was natural but maybe could've been improved also the setting for the video could've been better.The costume in the video could've also been improved as it could've been matched to the theme that we intended to create.The make up used was good as it went well with the theme and horror aspect of the project.I could've improved my video by using the time i had to edit it properly instead of waiting to do it last minute i should've done it when it was set for us.